The Frozen Lagoon Shoot
Across the River and into the TreesThis flow follows the duck hunt from a difficult icy approach to Cantwell’s conflict with a boatman and his final, limited success in the blind.
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Bearing strength in each event
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Breaking the Ice

Breaking the Ice
A hard approach
Cantwell helps pole the boat through newly frozen water toward the shooting blind. The labor makes the outing physically demanding before the hunt begins.
A strained partnership
The boatman is surly and unhelpful, while Cantwell tries to keep his temper and preserve the day’s pleasure. Their tension foreshadows the later breach of hunting etiquette.
The First Double

The First Double
Careful shooting
Cantwell takes two descending ducks while accounting for the boat’s position. He takes pride in the accuracy of the shots and in the care he has shown the men working nearby.
Pleasure under constraint
The success restores his confidence, but the ice limits the prospects for the day. The hunt remains a fragile pleasure shaped by weather and cooperation.
A Broken Rule

A Broken Rule
The boatman fires
The boatman shoots at ducks approaching Cantwell’s blind, violating the basic expectation that a shooter’s birds are not taken by someone else. Cantwell is shocked and angry.
Anger contained
Too far away to call to the man, Cantwell fires two warning shots in his direction. He then takes medication and tries to understand the hostility rather than let it ruin the hunt.
Four Ducks and a Cripple

Four Ducks and a Cripple
Limited success
Cantwell shoots four ducks despite the frozen water and the boatman’s interference. He also recovers a wing-tipped mallard alive rather than treating it as another trophy.
A humane choice
He asks that the bird be kept for a caller or released in spring. His decision contrasts the violence of shooting with a practical form of care.
An Explanation at the Lodge

An Explanation at the Lodge
The hidden cause
Alvarito explains that the boatman’s wife and daughter were raped when Moroccan troops passed through the area. The Allied uniform has become a trigger for his anger.
Anger reinterpreted
Cantwell asks for a drink rather than defending himself or condemning the man. The explanation reframes the hostility as an injury tied to war, not merely personal discourtesy.
Before daylight on the first hunting morning
At first light in the sunken barrel
Later that morning on the frozen lagoon
Near the end of the frozen-lagoon hunt
After the hunt, inside the canal-side house